Notes from a friend

On Monday I got some notes on the The Romantic Feminist from Denise.  I am going through the book from beginning to end, reading it aloud to myself and making adjustments.   I am incorporating some of her suggestions, I have cut back on one character, and will reduce some of the conversations... and I have twiddled a little bit with the end - but not much.  I am going to send the improved version to the Agent at the end of the week I hope - and point out that it's nearly a year since I first approached her and that August was quite a long time ago!

I am sleepy for some reason, although it's the middle of the day.